Story Analysis & Notes

Service Description

If you’ve already written a script/manuscript, story outline, or pitch package, I’ll review it and provide detailed feedback notes to help you improve your narrative structure, characters, thematic development, scenes, and dialogue. Also for producers who need professional notes on existing scripts or assistance with new story development including ideation, logic and flow, market, adherence to continuity and run time. • Treatment review + Notes + 60 minute follow-up (10 pages or less) - $150 • Script review + Notes + 60 minute follow-up (110 pages or less) - $350 • Pitch preparation & full business review (+ 60 minute follow-up) - $250 • Individual consultation / Extended session - $150/hour

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