Coverage
Expert feedback and recommendations
on your script, manuscript or message.
For serious storytellers who want to take their project to the finish line.
Novelists
Non-fiction writers
Screenwriters
Podcasters
Business professionals
Speech writers
Memoirists
Social influencers
Goal review
Discuss project purpose, target audience and intended outcomes.
Expert read
Work with a former coverage specialist and veteran editor.
Detailed feedback
Find where to tighten pacing, clarify throughline or reorder material.
Targeted priorities
Know what to tackle first and what changes will matter most.
Are we picking up
what you're putting down?
Premise and audience.
How clear is your idea, and who will it appeal to?
Voice and impact.
How do your voice, message and characters come across?
Structure and pacing.
Where does the draft flow, drag, or lose the reader?
Priority revisions.
What needs to be adjusted, removed, added or reconsidered?
COVERAGE (SCRIPT/MANUSCRIPT)
Full read + report + follow-up
$595/month CAD
Full script read
Comprehensive feedback report
90-minute, in-person follow-up review
YOU'LL RECEIVE...
Industry-level appraisal and recommendations
A clear assessment of premise and appeal
Notes on structure, style, pacing, message clarity and where readers may lose interest
A ranked list of revisions
Personalized support
Complete confidentiality
Industry-level guidance
Free tools & resources
What do previous clients say?
"I highly recommend Paul. His training, mentorship and constructive feedback has improved the way I approach projects and has had an incredibly positive impact on my writing. If you need realistic and valuable insight into the film/TV industry or you want to hone your writing skills, Paul is the person to talk to!"
Lucy Bowerman-Smith
Writer-Producer, Darkstead podcast
“To anybody looking for top tier film writing education: Paul has been an enormous help with the evolution of my script which will soon be going into production!”
Greg Melanson
Writer-Producer, CEO, Storylance
"Paul listened patiently to my ideas, asked thoughtful questions, and offered suggestions that helped me develop my characters and story. Throughout the entire process Paul was mindful of the goals that I was trying to achieve and advised me accordingly. Highly recommend."
Charn Nanray
Writer
"Paul is an amazing educator with a great passion for his subject matter. He's empowered me to think about story in new ways and has helped me take my current project to the next level.”
Jeff Christensen
Teacher
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