Professional Coverage
Find out what's working, what isn't, and what to do next.
Thoughtful, in-depth feedback to strengthen your story and help you reach your full potential as a writer.
See your work clearly.
When you’ve spent months (or years) inside a story, it can be difficult to see what’s actually on the page.
Coverage gives you an experienced outside perspective on your screenplay or manuscript: what’s working, where the story is losing clarity or momentum, and what changes could make it stronger.
I’ll read your complete screenplay and provide detailed written feedback focused on the areas that matter most to the success of your story.
Understand what your story is.
This isn’t proofreading or a list of surface-level notes.
We’ll look at the project as a whole: its concept, structure, characters, conflict, pacing, theme, dialogue and emotional impact to identify its strengths and biggest opportunities for improvement.
You’ll come away knowing where your script stands and what to work on next.
Personalized support
Complete confidentiality
Practical resources
Industry-level guidance
Complete read
Your work is read in full and considered as a complete story, not evaluated from isolated pages or excerpts.
Strengths & opportunites
Learn what is already working and which changes are most likely to meaningfully improve the screenplay - from a human, not AI.
Professional coach
Gain insights from an industry insider who's worked in film, television, podcast, and university-level learning.
Clear priorities
Instead of being overwhelmed by dozens of possible changes, you’ll know which story problems deserve your attention first.
Ideal for you if you're:
Revising a completed work
Preparing for another draft
Unsure what’s working or what needs fixing
Getting ready to submit or share your script
Looking for professional feedback before taking the next step
What you’ll get:
Look forward to:
A complete professional read
Detailed written coverage
Assessment of story, structure, character, pacing, dialogue, tone and style
Identification of strengths and problem areas
Prioritized recommendations for your rewrite
See the story clearer. Make your next draft stronger.
$395
per session
Still have questions?
Book a FREE 30-minute consultation.
Zero pressure, just answers.
What do previous clients say?
"I highly recommend Paul. His training, mentorship and constructive feedback has improved the way I approach projects and has had an incredibly positive impact on my writing. If you need realistic and valuable insight into the film/TV industry or you want to hone your writing skills, Paul is the person to talk to!"
Lucy Bowerman-Smith
Writer-Producer, Darkstead podcast
“To anybody looking for top tier film writing education: Paul has been an enormous help with the evolution of my script which will soon be going into production!”
Greg Melanson
Writer-Producer, CEO, Storylance
"Paul listened patiently to my ideas, asked thoughtful questions, and offered suggestions that helped me develop my characters and story. Throughout the entire process Paul was mindful of the goals that I was trying to achieve and advised me accordingly. Highly recommend."
Charn Nanray
Writer
"Paul is an amazing educator with a great passion for his subject matter. He's empowered me to think about story in new ways and has helped me take my current project to the next level.”
Jeff Christensen
Teacher
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