Coverage + Clarity
Get the full picture.
Build the path forward.
Comprehensive written feedback on your screenplay or manuscript, followed by a 90-minute one-on-one session to solve key story problems and build a clear, prioritized plan for your rewrite.
Feedback is only useful if you know what to do with it.
You’ve finished a draft. You know it can be stronger. But figuring out what actually needs fixing (and where to begin) can be difficult when you’re this close to the story.
Coverage + Clarity gives you both pieces: a comprehensive professional assessment of your work, followed by a personal session where we dig into the feedback together.
You’ll leave knowing what to change, why it matters, and what to do next.
Let's dive in.
After receiving your coverage, we’ll meet for 90 minutes to unpack the feedback, discuss your questions, and dig deeper into the areas that matter most.
Together, we’ll explore possible solutions to key story problems, clarify anything that feels uncertain, and determine which changes will have the greatest impact.
Most importantly, we’ll turn the feedback into a clear, prioritized revision plan so you leave knowing not only what needs work, but where to go from here.
Personalized support
Complete confidentiality
Practical resources
Industry-level guidance
Comprehensive coverage
Get a detailed written assessment of your story, including its strengths, weaknesses, and opportunities for improvement.
Prioritize your rewrite
Turn pages of feedback into a manageable hierarchy of changes, so you know what needs to happen first—and what can wait
Solve problems
We’ll focus our time on the issues that will make the greatest difference to your story rather than getting lost in minor fixes.
Build your revision plan
Leave with clear next steps and a practical roadmap for taking your story into its next draft.
Ideal for you if you're:
Revising a completed screenplay or manuscript
Unsure which problems need your attention first
Preparing for a major rewrite
Getting ready to submit, pitch, or share your work
Looking for professional feedback and help actioning it
What you’ll get:
Look forward to:
Comprehensive written story coverage
Clear assessment of strengths and weaknesses
A private 90-minute one-on-one session
The opportunity to unpack your feedback
Help solving your biggest story problems
A clear, prioritized revision plan
Understand your story. Know what comes next.
$595
per session
Still have questions?
Book a FREE 30-minute consultation.
Zero pressure, just answers.
What do previous clients say?
"I highly recommend Paul. His training, mentorship and constructive feedback has improved the way I approach projects and has had an incredibly positive impact on my writing. If you need realistic and valuable insight into the film/TV industry or you want to hone your writing skills, Paul is the person to talk to!"
Lucy Bowerman-Smith
Writer-Producer, Darkstead podcast
“To anybody looking for top tier film writing education: Paul has been an enormous help with the evolution of my script which will soon be going into production!”
Greg Melanson
Writer-Producer, CEO, Storylance
"Paul listened patiently to my ideas, asked thoughtful questions, and offered suggestions that helped me develop my characters and story. Throughout the entire process Paul was mindful of the goals that I was trying to achieve and advised me accordingly. Highly recommend."
Charn Nanray
Writer
"Paul is an amazing educator with a great passion for his subject matter. He's empowered me to think about story in new ways and has helped me take my current project to the next level.”
Jeff Christensen
Teacher
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